domingo, 7 de febrero de 2010

LOVE WORDS

I owe my life happily
because my life has meaning
that sense you give your
because in my heart these
giving joy
because my life is you

1 comentario:

  1. you must to change the word (because) for other one , because you out this word many times
    and in the line 3 is (give me)
    and un the last word in the last line is (yours)
    but everything is correct just that
    good job!
    go ahead you can do it!

    cris garanzuay

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